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Night Hobbies.

Quicken my heart
with the sound
of your whispers,
promising me a sample
of your soul unleashed.

Then let down your hair
and let all earthly wear
tumble too in a soft heap.

Harden me using
only the knowledge
that I will soon
be captured by
your softness,
grasping the full
length of my adoration
towards you.

Moisten my lips
with a passionate kiss,
let yours wallow
and linger on mine,
till that slippery
feel is duplicated
elsewhere in frantic
and ecstatic endeavors.

Join with me
and become
as a vase adorned,
into which a long stem
is inserted and blooms
pearl petals that glisten
with the dew of desire.

Sing with me in harmony
the squeals of delight
that brighten the night,
and make neighbors smile
at the sounds and perhaps
cause them to turn as well to
the horizontal rumba,
under quilts and heavy sighs.

Quicken ..harden... promise...
soften...moisten..join...
become be coming ....desire....
sing.....delight..brighten ...
and smile as the world all around
explores night hobbies
with vigor and vim.


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  • Trixie08
    April 29

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    ...wow is pretty much all I can say because words alone would not do this poem justice. Thank you so much for your entry and best of luck in the contest.
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