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Underestimate Me

Wolf; wolf, Hunt the prey. Hunt and pray,
The fire burning in my heart, shouldnt smoulder into dust.
Unforgiving in a frenzy of self taught distrust.
The beast has welcomed itself into my house,
Stay still, dont move; don't even breathe.....

Unless you want your end to be devastation.
A Crime of passion, fueled by defeat and lies.
The wreakage will be all to tell of your pityful cries.
I have awoken and you may feel safe;
However I always win and I don't concede.

I cant compare, the scent of you to the scent of me,
Your a lamb and I'm a wolf, Your the reality and I'm in the shadows.
For you this game is over but for me it has just begun.
It saddens me to see you so helpless, without even knowing it.
The wolf in the lambs clothing stalks your every move.

I want to see you burn at the alter,
I want to see you weep for the judge,
I want to hear you beg me for mercy,
I want to watch you fall into your own lies.
What you dont know; is that I know, that you think I dont know....

How unfortunate for you... to underestimate me.

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This is a warning...
When the claws come out, I dont play nice! BITCH

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    May 1

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    Powerfully written

    Thank you for your entry.A great write and powerfully penned.

    these lines tugged hard and i can relate to them for i feel the same way towards the animal who murdered my mother via domestic abuse....

     

    I want to see you burn at the alter,
    I want to see you weep for the judge,
    I want to hear you beg me for mercy,
    I want to watch you fall into your own lies.
    What you dont know; is that I know, that you think I dont know....

    How unfortunate for you... to underestimate me.

    I hope that it helped to get that frustration out of your system.
    Take care my friend and I wish you well.
    ~Anne~


  • glenn shannon silver member
    May 1

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    holy moly an aussie girl ripping it up class act there.glad i dropped by for a look powerful jumps out and bashes the reader with emotion. thats the stuff ps old aussie here welcomes you glenn s.a.