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Taking Pictures Of Wanda







Finality of summer’s equinox becomes autumnal, pregnant
is winter          it slinks
into earthen meadowlarked songs in
but must brush along through springtime’s thighs
like fire with embers myriad colored
sparking orange, blue, reds and all the tertiaries of edible and fruiting math
dripped across the naked breasts of women and gardeners’
smiles

how love does wink at solemn gods’
true wants and their pretend playdough dogmas for the dull to embrace


but old man winter bides his time,
his snowflakes are outlaws fled of watering grave minds

how musical is this mass the sparking night of silent party making forests
where chuckle upon the mountaintops’ bondage promises as freedom
does the owl                its fat feet brush away the limbs behind
assumption of flight has no finite tiptop


I try to snapshot this instant of truth
my brain has no such shutter speed, only my blood

where she opens brightly the portal

captures

my only cradle of innocence, where flames of ancient gods grow silent
and the nocturnal forest begins to breathe

utterly breathtaken















Author notes

M O Q U I T A K O D A

J. Morriosn " I touched her thigh,
and Death smiled"


dedicated to my beloved Swan

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  • There is only poet this could be. not among your best, but even your worst is top shelf.
    I guess the highlight of this read for me personally was

    how love does wink at solemn gods’
    true wants and their pretend playdough dogmas for the dull to embrace

    playdough dogma... oh you character you. good un.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 30

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    I love these amazing words, my Baby. You always impress...every single day. I love you.





  • lunarlunacy
    April 29
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    impressive as always Moq.