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Spiraling

Chortling laughter around every bend
I can feel their eyes boring into my head
Shadows waver beneath my eyes
I’m seeing things, how could that be a lie?
I pull myself down and curl into a ball
Will it pass or will I fall?
The gates are open and reason has passed
Why does hope never seem to last?
I have failed; they show me it is so
Why is it then I can't let it go?
Again I am loosing control
Spiraling further down into that black hole

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