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wounds cut deep

The blood drains from the wounds cut deep
All the tears gone,  No more I weep

Vows taken under earth and sky
Hold me honor bound
Until I die..
Release me now from this life I beg
To you alone ,I find you dead

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 26
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    You have a great ryming scheme. This is the mark of a good poetess