in this place
I long to be
lies a path
to a secret
glade
where I go
in my memories
traverse a sultry
summers day
holding hands
smiling
our first embrace
took us away
in heavens climate
escaping the race
to an Eden
serene
within nature's core
we found delight
all the way
as sun sets
to a starry
freedom
Author notes
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1102/760288791_d468046331.jpg
A contest entry
- PICTURE CONTEST by penman.
1150 points, ended May 1, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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What a read this one is! Wow! The feelings and emotions in this are amazing! Great job! Love your take on the picture!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Soft and serene feeling comes about when reading this piece and viewing the pic. Your choice of words are splendid with this picture...lighted paths when love is new and all things great and small have no bearing on how invincible one feels with our heaven beside us. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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