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Give me the faith I need
To go on another day
When the people that I care about
Just all seem to go away
My husband in 2006
GOD I WISH HE WAS HERE
A family friend (almost mother like )
My mom still sheds her tears
And now once again
I'm faced with it
Losing another friend
A week at best,was their best guess
And how can I do this again

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Back in January of this year I lost someone to cancer once again.

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  • LilyRose
    April 30

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    I was there one day when I was sick, I fever that wouldn't retreat. I cried and cussed in anger for no holy feeling filled me. I felt all alone with the ground slipping out from beneath me, asking how can I care for a sick child when I am so sick myself. I did not find faith in the highly acclaimed "christian God"...which angered me beyond realms, life was left up to me...and as I read the sorrow that shadows your loving heart - I extend my hand to you, please take it for in my warmth I give you my friendship and strength - with a friend...is how you do this again ... I am here, Anna

  • LivetoWrite
    April 29
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    Very sad, but beautifully written. I'm glad you got this out. Props on the Rhyme.