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Todays Emotions (explicit)

Now a days
Who can you really talk to?

No one.

When you have an issue
a problem
something that hurts so
deep
You think death would feel better.

All you hear is
It will be okay
You will get through this
What doesn't kill you...
 

Blah blah && all that other bull shit.

For once, someone, please

Tell me the truth

Your life sucks, young lady, its fucked up
but stop pouting and move on


For once, someone, Please
Cry with me
Yell with me
get pissed
throw shit with me
fight with me

Today's Emotions are simple

People see you have an issue

ask why, whats wrong, or the like,
just to be nosey

 

really

 

not caring about your life
or the issue

 

Then when that cat has
Satisfied his curiosity

he mumbles things
things he THINKS I want to hear...

I blow up
Get pissed off
Yell
Fight
Throw shit
all to his responses of
its okay
you will be fine


and at last I whisper



Well Mr. Cat....

That's what you fucking get for thinking.

Author notes

Sometimes just yelling,screaming && cussing are the best remedy.

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  • Oisin silver member
    May 18

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    Can I throw a compliment at you and tell you this is nice piece for an angry poem? It cries out much like the inspiration for it did.

    very interesting indeed,

  • this was good. i love it.

  • I know what you mean, I love your structure, Its harsh and choppy like the anger you are expressing.

    Good write and good luck to you!


  • individuality gold member
    April 28

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    a good poem, aye, people are too busy with their own mad lives i think to give a feck about others, though here and there they pat you with oh i know what you mean but won't get pissed and throw shit in the air