Remember when you were younger?
When sharing a drink with a crush
Was really a confession of undying love,
Like swapping minimal bodily fluids
Was the same as standing at the alter.
Now I could split my water bottle
With a random hobo and feel unchanged.
Author notes
Random thought.
Oh, nostalgia!
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simple but powerful.. clever comparison, lovesssss
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haha, yea interesting thought,
i actually think sometimes that is true.
-sad, your not the only one having those thoughts
great write. -
hhhmmm that is a very interesting thought.
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Lol, this makes me laugh. Nostalgia indeed. :]
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i love your poems! they're genius!!! XD
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Oh yes
You definitely brought memories back.
Good ones too.
Genius. <3
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hm. i like the concept. :]
alter-->altar.
& i don't like 'random hobo.' kind of unpoetic.
i looooove 'swapping minimal body fluids'
i take it you mean a kiss. :]
interesting + clever. nice job.
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