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unattainable.

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breathing through smoke screens made me find something better,
when I fell helpless to your arms & you helped me get back up.
& everyday I'll remember you sweetly, & I will never be able to let you go.

  [Until I become your unrequited...]


She speaks of nature's genre with solemn passion
& speaks of words I've never heard before,
She addresses me as a savior; but she is nothing to me, yet, she's dressed in all of me;
& I can't feel her touch, I can't taste her tears, because she's not here...



breathless laid what was once named as I, cold & forgotten;
yet, the soul lingers, crossing gently your way, tenderly caressing you with the wind.
A sweet eloquent melody moves & sways ever so beautifully every cadaver built
in mutual arrangement.


[... Save me ...]


She whispers lovely rosaries & prayers, but I could hear her not;
& All my dreams have sweet remnants of her loving smile;
I miss her, she was worth a while, yet I never spoke of her grace,
yet I never told her what she meant to me...




breathe into sulfuric arrogance & drink marvelous mystery,
genuine evolution crashed in my ultraviolet irises
as my skin began to ashen & my soul began to detach.
I was gone... forever...


She covers her flaws with dirt & flowers,
collapsing beauty with graveled scenery.
She's the melody nobody hums,
the one religion I dare not forget to learn.

She's unattainable...



breaths exhaled while time whirls down,
every picture twirls around.
I drown myself onto silent goodbyes.

I'll miss you... always...


She's beauty underneath shadowed skies,
shattered beauty in broken eyes;
& she's not here,
because she's not real





Author notes

this was written and inspired by Vermilion Pt. 2 by Slipknot.....


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  • Rose Angel gold member
    May 28

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    Awesome write...You have us believing she is real, till the very end...Such a weaving of imagery and characterizations.....Truly talented are you, and keep penning!

  • amazing

    expecially love the melody nobody hums


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 27

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    Daddy loves you!!!

    I love reading your poetry! Your words are way before your time. You have immense talent, sweetie!!!!
    I am featuring this for "Today's Poem", because I am a fan of you and a fan of Slip Knot!!!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy

  • you are one talented Poet Sis.
    your words flow through my heart and mind.
    Beautiful work

    Blessings

    Rend

  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 15
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    One slight glitch...found should be find...You still amaze me with your words, sweetie! I didn't know you are a Slipknot fan, too, cool!!! I love reading your poetry!!!

    Love ya' lots,
    Jeremy

  • Nice job on this one. I enjoyed it. Very well done.

    Mike

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