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My Savage

My shadow is peaking out of its corner,
My savage is scaling the walls of its cell.
My heart is turning itself inside out.
You’re putting me through hell.

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  • ertaylor
    April 29
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    oo i like this


    a lot!!

    great short powerful flow


  • Eddie Ecstasy
    April 28

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    a little hard to read.

    But still, really powerful. I'm guessing you're writing about a loss here? At least, that's how it seems to me. Awesome!