Your eyes so peircing and perfect,
They mesmerize me,
Your lips so soft and delicate,
As smooth as can be,
A kiss so priceless,
Cant you see,
We were ment to be.
Your singing like an angel,
So calm and so sweet,
It never makes me feel incomlete.
Your hair,
Luscious and brown,
And your love so strong,
That whenever Im with you nothing feels wrong.
Your voice so comforting,
It makes me never want to leave,
Especially after you say you love me,
Making everything in the world easy to believe.
And your touch is so soft,
It melts my heart,
Making me never want us to be apart.
Your smell is so addictive,
With your ways so predictive,
And whenever I'm under the weather,
One glimpse of you and I feel better.
And as the world comes crashing down,
I am happy I have you around,
Because you catch me before I fall face down
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this is a poem im writting for my boyfriend please give me your advice
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Mak! This is fantabulous! You are growing by leaps and bounds in skill and emotional expression. This deserves three clappies, for sure. The fact that I know the boy who is the subject of this piece makes it all the more special. lucky him!
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thanks and how do u know who it is???????
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Do not change one word of this! Its so romantic and beautiful... AW.... is all i can say
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very romantic...
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thanks
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My advice is to not even think about changing it! He will love it!
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yay warm fuzzies!
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