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In Too Deep

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I long to kiss the heart of love

nurturing the outer being

 

tasting hopes finer dreams

offering encouragement & praise

on days of uncertainy, I'll strengthen him

 

desires and passion reach fulfillment

essentials of keeping love strong

every imperfection revealing truths insight..

prize possession is knowing the person, beyond the outer shell

Author notes

Prompt: What is Love?

Dedicated to dear friend: In Too Deep 1

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  • Princess Kitten-
    May 1

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    Wonderful.

    In too deep. It speaks.

    Hmm. Very lovely peom it's very great. Thank you for entering and goodluck.

    ~XoXo Mollipop


  • log-home-guy-Nic
    April 30

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    I am in too deep myself

    Tory I love this piece. I will spend a lifetime writing thousands of poems to try and exspess what strength you give me. Knowing the person beyond the outer shell and way down in deep. Love you Tory


  • DolceVito gold member
    April 29

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    Outstanding acrostic, lovely dedication


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 29

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    for me..

    you're 'into deep' thoughts on many subjects, forms, and styles to get a handle on exactly to call what you do..but i think i got a title that fits just perfect..GENIUS!


  • In Too Deep1
    April 29

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    Wow! beautifully penned and touching. It is quite an honor to have a Diva such as yourself to use, beat and treat me as you do! ~smile~ Don't you dare ever stop! A most enjoyable read and best wishes in the comp

  • J Macabre
    April 29

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    Sometimes it does feel like your in too deep...past the point of no return when you love someone that much...can be frightening.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 29

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    Beautifully crafted acrostic, tender and heartfelt.

    Lovely stuff



    Jeff


  • maralisa silver member
    April 29

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    aw this is a beautiful dedication good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 28
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    I like this acrostic a lot, especially the final 2 lines.


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    April 28

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    Beautiful write and they are one lucky freind to have you feel that way. I really like how you turned this poem into an acrostic. Thank you for sharing.

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