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Your Mother, the Moon

Fat pools of reflected yellow
roll down your cheeks
warm and smooth.
The gentle flow blurs your vision
blissfully.
Succumb to the comfort with open arms
and an open mouth
to taste the salt.
As you tilt your head up
in silent prayer
the milk washes over you.
Return to the origin.

Author notes

lollerskates. people have asked me if this was about sex, or a boob, or other random things. actually, both of those interpretations are totally understandable, and they aren't completely untrue, but it really is about the moon and the goddess, so I guess the boob/sex thing works, since she represents many things and is represented in others and the boob can relate to the whole mother spirit thing...yeeeahhhh...

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  • LivetoWrite
    April 29
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    Beautiful imagery I love it! keep writing