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Grey Wind

You came from no where
From somewhere other than another
Have you been here the whole time?
Are my eyes blind?
Weakest hands,
Blurred eyes
Flooded withtears
Your eyes are clear as crystal
Shining in the dark,
Glowing in the day
It's a shadow, no sun needed
A soul that is mistaken
Been taken away
Realistic, not materialistic
All he needs is the air and truth
Something to make him live better, stronger
No nothing
I've wondered about you my whole life
You've rowed in the skies
Rained in the waters,
'I have not seen you, you are the wind
My tears
Something that will make me disapeer from here
You are the hands that could hold the world
A truth that could tell a lie
Rain and sun,
Night and day, combined
Are you the world
The color, of my eyes?

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  • electricsky12
    April 28
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    Sorry, i made a few grammical errors.
    Just pretend they're not there. Thanks