Standing in the rain
I can let all my
emotions out.
Standing in the rain
let's me let my tears
run and nobody can tell
the difference.
Standing in the rain
I can think of you
and not feel ashamed
to let my true
feelings about you show.
Thank you rain,
you are my cover.
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wow i can really relate to this. the rain is so amazing!!!! greaat write hun
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Isnt the rain just an amazing, peaceful way to just let go of your troubles and worries and just feel free of sadness or things that may have been bothering you? i love the rain and i also love your poem, its very sweet and simple, it brought a smile across my face as i was reading it and also gave me a spectacular image. wonderful job
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this was an amazing poem! it was so sweet and beautiful!! keep up the awesome work!! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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Awwww. This was a very sweet poem. Very true and heartfelt and I thank you for entering in my contest. The end was the picture conclusion to it all and I can agree with you on every aspect of this write. Good luck to you
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aww!
this was an awesome poem nightmare. i loved the emotions in this, and I understand how you feel. just know i'll always be here for you if you need to vent or talk. it brought tears to my eyes while i read this. so sasd, but yet so full of depth. keep up the good work!!! 
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