I saw you, walking down the street,
The breeze tenderly pushing the hair,
Out of that sweet face of yours,
I watch, with open eyes,
Trying hard not to stare.
You catch my gaze,
You look back,
Our eyes meet in a moment of softness,
Your lips produced the most delicate of smiles as you walked past me,
Watching me.
With almost the same timing we both look round,
Turning on the spot,
You walked to me,
You looked up at me with a caring and loving smile,
Your eyes saying all that you feel about me,
Loving Me.
You lean up and our lips meet,
In the most tender and passion filled kiss,
As we share the moment,
As we collide in a mesh of feelings,
You pull back pushing your lips past my cheek.
I wait and listen as three soft words leave your lips slowly,
"I Missed You"
Randomness, let me know.
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that is great
you should right more like that because that was one of the best poems i have ever read/one of my fav lines was line 22 -
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I have written more like this lol
And thanks 
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Awww!! Vewy sweet love poem.
I like the simplicity of the ending! ^-^
GREAT job
diggin' it majorly
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Thanks a lot Nephy Glad ya like it
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wow
wow that is beautiful you are really good :-) -
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Thanks
Awww thanks Thats very sweet of you, I've written a better Love Poem if you look through my poems
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Aw such a sweet poem with such tenderness.
A lovely poem.
However I feel there is one major line interrupting the flow. That doesn't quite ring right when I read it.
'With almost the same timing we both look round,'
But appart from that well written. From the heart is the best ^_^
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^^ this is really touching. It's so full of happiness and love. It's cute but I prefer to use the word beautiful instead great job.
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Thanks a lot for the comment, glad that you like it ^^
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