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Sad

I've been sad all day.
I don't wanna be sad.
I hate being sad.
It's sad.

Sadness Follows me,
Haunts Me,
Destroy's me,
It's Sad.

Someone,
Save me,
This Sadness,
Its Sad

Randomness, let me know.

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  • Nihima
    May 5
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    Intresting format and flow. The repetition of 'Sad' definately gets the message across


  • Xpianistpassionx
    May 1

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    i like it jordan. it's really good let alone you wrote it out of boredom. dont be sad live everyday with joy