He woke with a vile soaring pain,
snaking its way through every vein.
Standing above him, trouble and strife,
stood the one he loved, his doting wife.
She had a dream that he had strayed,
with a dirty whore in which he paid.
In their marital bed is where they screwed,
sweaty, disgusting, filthy and crude.
The images of them drove her insane,
graphic obscenities burned in her brain.
She couldn’t allow him to ruin their life,
so she cut of his cock with a kitchen knife.
What did you think
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Lord girl, this tickled the shit outta me! Now I will probably spend the next couple of days singing this in my head and laughing aloud like an insane person. I absolutely loved this. Still laughing. "so she cut off his cock with a kitchen knife", That's rich! LOL!
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Yikes lol
Well I guess he should have kept it to himself lol. This is a good write, very funny....
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very good flow and a nice enough poem
just getting a grip on my cock
hate to see it cut off lol
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awesome
so funny
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! so scary!!!!!!!!!!!!! yet so well written, well done though i will have nightmares
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lmao. thats hysterical! i love how the rhym skeem makes it even funnier.
dont change a thing!
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mrs bobbitt would love you and it happened here just a few hoses up only weeks ago unfortunately then she doused him in fuel and he was smoking at the morgue well done hell i wouldnt stay the night at your place
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OMG
omg your back!!! this is f###ing awsome!
brilliantly vivid and so passionate, its great!!
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LMAO
Woah- lets not get on the wrong side of YOU! lol....I really liked it, very graphic and flowed well
Well done
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