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Me and Her

Her picture is in your wallet,
mine is on the floor.

Her name flows off your tongue,
mine chokes in your throat.

Her hands squeeze your heart, your soul,
mine grasp empty space.

Her love gasps for breath in creek,
mine breathes throughout the universe.

Yet your ocean eyes drown me,
where they used to hold me up.

Your waves crash down on me,
where they used to lull me to sleep.

Your tides jostle and fight me,
where they used to cradle me close.

Her.
Me.
You.

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  • ertaylor
    April 29

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    i love this. it doesnt seem done to me though, like it should have more. idk if u meant it to be that way or not but it is still very good