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Live Die

You don’t amount to anything
You know this
So just find a knife
And die
Pull that silver edge across your neck
And accept the bloody mess you are
And have been all your life
So don’t be a coward
Don’t try to save your friends
Of the pain
Just get out that knife
And die

Life
Because you know you’re meant to
[Die]
Go far
[Fall]
Pull yourself from this pit
[Die]
Wipe yourself of your sins
[Bleed]
And live
Because you’re beautiful and
[Ugly]
You deserve it
[Die]

Your friends don’t care
They never have
They never will
You’re lying to yourself
You don’t deserve a life
So just Die already!
Die
For the world
Die
For your friends
Die
For strength
And Die
For life

No!
[Yes]
Don’t follow the lies!
You need to live
[Die]
Your family loves you
You know that your friends do
[Not]
So live
[Die]
Heal your wounds
[Open them again]
Love yourself
[Die in hatred]
And Live

Live
Die
Live
Die
Life
Death
Love
Hate
Live
Die

Author notes

Um...this one's a little bit older...but I like it...kinda. Have had it in my head since the day--well, night--I wrote it. A little bit creepy for me, but whatever.

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Comments

  • wow, this is a really deep poem, I get the feeling this might be how you feel, this is really good though... I'm loving this stuff, make more please.

  • wow, this poem is amazing..i like it..it is showing like 2 sides of you!! good job!! keep up the good write.