the meandyou that is the
prism in your eye
sometimes runs away from me
catching us[ as we laugh how so]
in the youth of our years
with youandyou right behind each other
watching onebyone and twobytwo
[as the leaf that is you]
becomes the woman I cherish so
what should i improve?
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i like it.
especially how you made some of the words
run together and stuff.
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