As your eyes look into my very soul
I feel your presence constantly in me
like a strong grip, your love has full control
I won’t ever turn from you or disagree
With wings like a bird, I will fly to you
be by your side in times of misery
comfort you, as your spirit is renew
only your love is what holds mastery.
You're the one I see in the morning light,
when dawn peeks though with a glorious day
last one I’m holding as I say goodnight
while we watch the starry heavens display
Cuddling close, I wrap myself around,
as I enter dreamland not making a sound…
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10. Waiting For You
I could not describe the feeling what I have now , Longing for Someone whose very Far from me, Hoping he do the same with me, Praying that he is OK and thinking of me , I know I have to wait ...
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Beautifully heart warming..
So full of loving images.
Thanks for sharing.
Tony
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An excellent love sonnet and a really fine poem. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.
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Steller achievement. Written with feeling that just shines through every line, well done indeed.
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Hi,
I love this. It makes you just feel good when you're finished reading it. So very beautiful and romantic in a soft way.
Thanks for your entry and following the rules.
Kari -
So many wait to experience this kind of deep and abiding love without ever really realizing it.....Beautifully written by one who must posses a romantic soul...Thank you for your entry!
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Nice Read. How are you doing Sandra?
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*Sigh* How very beautifully and softly penned, yet full of love and deep meaning. So romantic
A lovely flow and rhyme to this also.
Thank you for your entry
Gaylene
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This tugs heart dear...beautiful ...many
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A very touching write, well composed and beautifully written. Flows wonderfully. Well done! Thank you for a great entry!
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