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The Fight

Pack your hearts
Grab you swords
This is no longer a battle
But now a war

We meet upon the battlefield
Where all must fight
And none can yield

The Trojan solders are on their way
So remember carpe diem
Seize the day

Be brave young men and women the same
Protect your souls
Claim your fame

I cannot end
Or stop this war.
I need to fight
Settle the score.

Charge with courage
Fight with pride
Even if we lose at least we tried

So into the battle away we go
Fighting our hardest
With a desire to know








Author notes

"This is a battle,a war,and the casualties could be your hearts and souls."
Quote from Dead Poets Society

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  • demonic princess93
    June 11
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    this is mad deep.
    my favorite line is..."Charge with courage Fight with pride Even if we lose at least we tried."
    good job.

  • Mr.AKALLDAY
    May 1
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    I like how you turned this poem into a big war. the poem was really intresting .

  • SerenityTranquility
    April 29
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    I'm commenting this again because you said sooo

  • drew16
    April 29
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    Yeah this poem is probably the best i have ever read in this class =D

  • PrincessGirl
    April 29
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    very creative

  • SerenityTranquility
    April 28
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    Awe Nazz I love your poems :]
    Theyre always awesome
    Way to go<3

  • thoughts4days
    April 28

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    Pack your hearts
    Grab you swords
    This is no longer a battle
    But now a war
    wow what a great way to start the poem off. very powerful. deffiently made me interested. great poem keep it up!!!!!


  • demonic princess93
    April 28

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    this is really good.
    i love the line "Charge with courage
    Fight with pride
    Even if we lose at least we tried"


  • Dana809
    April 28
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    Wow this is really good..
    unarguably if thats a word you and cassie think alike your bestfriend and both of your poems are about war. I love that u alays talk about love.. Maybe youll find a boyfriend on myspace soon lol.
    Ne wayz your poem was really good i love the detailes that you put in it i could almost see the visuals as i read the poem.
    bye


  • C.o.g.
    April 28
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    I like this because it rhyme's and because its just contributes so much to the movie great JOB!


  • Trinaxbaybiie
    April 28

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    I really love this poem its amazing my favorite line is "Charge with courage
    Fight with pride
    Even if we lose at least we tried" this made me feel like I can do anything .. but I think you should change some grammar or atleast revise it.

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