I wanna be the one to make her laugh,
make her cry,
make her sigh.
I wanna be the one she comes home to,
late at night,
or when it's bright.
I wanna be the one she trusts,
the one she tells everything to,
and then asks what to do.
I wanna be the one she gives her heart to,
gives her body to,
gives her mind to.
I waanna reach deep into her soul,
and draw out her love,
and draw out her smile.
I wanna be who she laughs with,
who she lives with,
who she sits with.
I wanna be the name at the end of her notes,
at the end of her life,
at the end of her sigh.
I wanna be everything to her,
give everything to her,
feel everything for her.
I wanna be the love of her life,
the light of her life,
the apple of her eye.
Does she see me, hear me?
Wanting?
Flaunting?
Does she see the glint in my eye?
the end of my smile?
that lasts a lil while?
Does she see the way I watch her?
Want her?
Love her?
I think she doesn't see me here,
on the outside,
wanting inside.
I think she could love me too,
if she tried,
if i cried.
Would she care?
If i cried,
if i died....
A really long love poem for the Meine Liebe.
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I like this poem very much, i can relate to it.
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I Like it...
Alot....and Yeah I do still care. It may not fix things...but idk what to do..
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This is Amazing... I felt like that at the beginning of my relationship... i had no idea what to do... your an amazing writer! I can't wait to read more!
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well done!
u wrote it very well, and its how im feeling right now. wonderful write. -
amazingly good
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Lovely
Well this is very lovely. it's purely from the heart and that's just beautiful. I think you did an excellent job writing it. This girl is lucky to have you interested in her, that's for sure. Keep up the amazing writes.
~~Tori~~
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interesting
this is great, its not going to fix anything but still good. so who wrote this todd or sharon? just out of curiosity, i know how close you two are.
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remember Lisa, we're both the saem person now. this came from both people. although idk how it wud coem from Sharon when tht's jsut a name. but ok. lol. thansk for the comment.
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