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when you breathe (lyrics)

verse one: stammer and stutter
tell me, how are you feeling?
holding hands we can fall
from grace so much easier
in between the place where
pain is tangeable
and the sky dissolves
i hold you like an unedited story
praying we get the
ending we deserve

CHORUS: remember when you breathe
you breathe for me
i hope when you sleep
your dreams are sweet
i would never wish you harm
for all the harm you've done
you had the best intentions
with the worst possible outcome

verse two: don't hold any of it back
your words burn and they soothe
granted i never thought we'd
get this far, but what have i got to loose?
in between the place where
only music can move you
and the moon is red
you crush me into your
blackblue heart
and pray i can feel your heartbeat
still

CHORUS: remember when you breathe
you breathe for me
i hope when you sleep
your dreams are sweet
i would never wish you harm
for all the harm you've done
you had the best intentions
with the worst possible outcome
(x2)

bridge/end:
i hold you like an unedited story
praying we get the ending
we deserve
i live inside your blackblue heart
i can feel your heart beat still
i can feel your heart beat still
i can feel your
heart beat


Author notes

hum. writer's block finally cracked at around 3:30 am. -.-
i dont sleep much lol.

this isnt half bad. like the music thats coming with it.

assume nothing

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Comments

  • This is amazing. I lovedd the chorus. I could definately relate to these lines:
    i would never wish you harm
    for all the harm you've done
    you had the best intentions
    with the worst possible outcome

    and I loved that you called it a "blackblue heart" and not just a bruised heart.

    It was great Julia. You are way too talented, I'm jealous.

    <3