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Aprils Clouds

I always loved you,
But you could never see.
Now it's too late to make it right.
All the plans we made for life,
Just won't be apart of reality.
Only in my dreams at night,
Only in my fanatsies.

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  • Very nice write, but sad to feel.


  • greyhaime
    April 28

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    welcome to allpoetry

    this is lovely,, and sad,, I loved the flow,, thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site, if I may suggest, you may want to change the color of the text to a lighter color, it's hard to see on this background. but well done! keep up the writing,
    cheers