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Eyelash Flutter Of Filter

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The eye knows when to shut,
when to blink, when to open wide

Lenses contracted, detracted,

Fractured light and prisms

Have you seen the dark swimming spots
of pollution in your viscous fluid
when you stare at a beige ceiling?

Perhaps those are the I-spy’s
filtered out for their absolute horror.

A woman’s eye know what to see,
eventually, knowing when to let down shutters,
to squeeze out what hurts sockets to see.

Strange that what was once ugly,
when stirred in visceral stew
is strained for soulful beauty.





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Prompt: # 7 jpg - "Emotion" - Jollypen - http://jollypen.deviantart.com/art/Emotions-120701845

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  • Kathraina silver member
    April 30

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    Nicely done
    I love what you've done with the prompt. Great imagery and flow throughtout!
    Bravo!


    ♥ Kate


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 28

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    Your woman's eye has always been a source of pure vision, my beloved Sister. Yes, some things will pain our sight...ahhh, but the Beauty we find somehow makes up for it. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie.