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Oh Little Swine

Oh little swine ye live in peace
for such a short life it is certainly a fruitful one.
But ye traitors who have been given much by man
Hath turned a nasty way and sing "dia del cerdo!"

Out of the billions you drain some lives
and after all the nice food we made you into
this is how you repay us?
Oh little swine who lived in peace, traitor.

There are some things in life that kill its true,
and i won't argue about the statistics,
toilets kill thousands every year,
But little swine we never expected it from you.

You tell me pig, the numbers from car crashes,
the millions from aids, but they're just fine,
Because they don't affect me, however now my life
is the one at risk, yes i do care!

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  • BrokenSanity
    June 19
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    Haha, I like the irony in this, good job poet! It'd be a shame to ignore the writing talent you have on here, you know... I like your style. i'll check some more out sometime. Keep penning, and good job. The verses helped it all flow wel and... I like pigs btw. Ah well....

    "I like pigs. Dogs look up to us, cats look down on us. but pigs treat us as equals." Winston Churchill.


  • StarEyes
    April 28

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    How true. I don't think any of us expected this from the pig.. And we get so many types of meat from one pig.. You really did a great job on this one! I love it!