You took all things away from me and cast me aside
Here I'm just crying in the inside
When you cast me on the side of the road and said:
Goodbye
A contest entry
- Three lines and One word by crivanea.
700 points, ended May 2, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
constructive critism only... hehe
Comments
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powerful..simple..n i find the question marks on the title to be good contradiction to the poem..thnx for entering
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Short and powerful! Awesome write here. Best wishes to you! Thanks for sharing this one wirth us!
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thanks!!!
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