I never got the chance
to hear your first words
to see your first steps
to listen to your problems
I never got to
tuck you in at night
tell you sweet dreams
to get you ready for school
I'll always
love you
hold you in my heart
miss you
You will always
be my daughter
be part of me
never be completely erased
I'm sorry
you could not stay
you did not git a chance to live a full life
Because your body may be gone
but your soul remains with me
Author notes
To my daughter whom i never got to raise
In a contest shatter my soul let my heart ache
A contest entry
- Shatter My Soul, Let My Heart Ache by Reaper-117.
1500 points, ended May 27, 106 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww thats sad bubby..
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thanks sis
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wow this is really sad... an im so sry bout it. an you know you can tlk to me ne time ok... ill aswer if im up or not busy
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yea i kno n thanks fo dat
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aww
I finally read it (:
And yea its real good.
Sad but good lol
i need to put my new ones up
i havent for a while
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yea thanks for readin it love ya sis
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This story has to be of the profounest kind of loss...not only the loss of a child but of one you never got to "know" thus obsession and what ifs become a numbing madness....If this is a true testament, as your comments lead me to believe, I am deeply sorry for your loss and thank you for sharing it here. Thanks for entering and the Gods bless you.
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yea it was a hard thing to go through n thanks for the comment
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My
As a father of 3 daughters I read this fine piece with an ache inmy heart. To never know such beauty. Sad beyond words poet.
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thank you for the comment n treat those three little ones with care n love
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I am so sorry for your loss. She had a Daddy who loved her and noone can ever take that away from you.
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yea I wish i coulve had more time with her though n thanks for the comment
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