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Angel Eyes

With the grace of floating angels,
a savoir comes to me
Cleansing first my troubled soul,
opening my eyes to see

Breathing life into my lungs,
with a light she shows the way
Warming as the morn begins,
then guides me through my day

Protecting me from harm,
she walks beside in my life
Always cautious, vigilant;
to keep me free from strife

Watching as I sleep the night,
guarding when I dream
Ever serving to protect me,
so my life may be serene 

One who’s always giving,
and never does ask in return
For this my blood is filled with fire,
for only her I yearn

Author notes

In the arms of an angel (and she knows who)

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  • I really liked this. The rhyme and meter flow are well done. The comfort that comes from your words are serene. Thank you for entering and best of luck. May your ink never cease to flow.


  • Heroesrox
    April 27

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    Wowie! This is sheer brilliance! I loved every line. Awesome write here, man! Thanks so much for the share! (Did you know there's a movie called Angel Eyes starring Jennifer Lopez? It's really good.)

    Best wishes and good luck in the contest!

  • Always a pleasure to be in the arms of an angel, you are blessed to have one, patience is the key and promise is the way...

     

    A lovely, beautiful piece...another one that makes me *sigh*

     

    Good luck

     

    Love,

     

    Victoria