The melody in my song
my work, my rest,
the grace in my dance
my spirit, my zest;
the smile on my lips
my devotion, my verse,
the path that I follow,
my journey, my traverse;
the water in my eyes,
my joy, my content,
the thoughts in my mind,
my descent, my ascent;
every work I do,
my energy my action,
every thought I think,
my knowledge my reaction;
the hands held in prayer,
my duty, my reward,
the love in my heart,
My life – my Lord;
It’s You, only You
Just You and nothing but You.
Author notes
i hope 22 lines is fine....? u said around 20... so i hope 22 would be acceptable. :-)
A contest entry
- and everywhere... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended May 11, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah..the total surrender and the toal faith..love the aspirations and the truth sttongly stated in the words..making this work quite enlightening..well done...
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yes, It is for him. Nice poem indeed Chirali
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thanks so much... glad u liked it. i wud say it is one of my favorites in my list of dedications to God.
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