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Bereft of Your Love.

Salty tears form into runnels of pain as they flow down my cheeks, washing the heartache into discarded tissues just as you discarded me.

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  • Topnotchsy
    May 4
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    This is sad, and powerful. The way you tied it together is a single line is really impressive. Nice write.