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Scorn Of The Cycles

The Thunder in the sky is in the hands of Zeus's wrath.
My we hide in fear  beneath Aquarius's tears.

Behold, our lives slip threw the thread of the three oracles true.
Only To be grasped by the hands of war, Mars and the valiant Thor

Look east, at the smashing rocks, set forth towards the sea. Bow down, before Neptune , God of the sea. He shall feed you plenty of the castrations of pain and irony. For the tears of men are drown in the sea.

What liveliness do you seem to ponder? Can this world get any fonder? For it's Aphrodite who holds beauty dear. Only to drench it in jealous tears.

So Who are the Gods which you fear? Don't be ignorant there are plenty. For those who are stubborn Not one God but many.

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  • wow this is one way that has not been used yet, i liked how you took a different perspective on the prompt, i liked it, i love all the greek gods, and how you discribed them, the poem was a delightful read and well, i just loved it.