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Peirs.

 

 


her bare back lies on a stack uprooted piers;
their make-shift bed of wooden planks.
legs entangled, bodies thrusting, they make

love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: 3 lines & 1 word

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  • crivanea silver member
    May 1
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    very sensual..nice word choice..thnx for entering


  • Candy Morphine
    April 28

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    gahh! you can always make everything so darn beautiful. i swear you are the most idyllic writer i have met.

    • EverxEnding silver member
      April 29
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      Don't you know how to flatter!
      Thank you so much! that means so so so much to me, you have no idea.
      I'm so glad you enjoy my writing. I guess you could say i've kind of started my own way of writing and I like it, so I stick to it.


  • Atrophya
    April 27

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    stop with the beautiful sex scenes would ya! xD

    it's a shocker every time i open your poems expecting to read them. xD

    • EverxEnding silver member
      April 27
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      lol! I've been in such a mood lately like ALL the time!
      when i sit down to write all that comes out of my brain is sex or drugs.
      Scandalous stuff! I post it any way though because i figure you guys deserve to get to read my writes like a tiny glimps into my mind & fantasies ;]
      Plus I'm reading Glass and she's all drugs and sex all the time


      • Atrophya
        April 27
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        geez! send me a copy will you! xD

        i like your mind xD

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