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Phantom of Romance

Sunset,
softens,
marble curves of your skin..

crimson,
lips,
romantic fascination..

beds seem made of roses,
erotic overdosage....


boldly,
brashly,
thought goes out the window..

kiss me,
hold me,
lose youself in passion..

move to close the blinds,
let your eyes adjust to find,
an open hand just waiting,
trembling now..
Trembling at the sight of marble curves..

Take my hand,
I'll caress away all your
thoughts of hate,
We'll embrace as the world just falls away..

take your time,
as our hearts begin..
to beat.....

And you'll love,
as you've never loved,
before...

Silk-like,
graceful,
clothes slip off the bedside..

draw me,
closer,
seduction in your figure..

lie back on the pillow,
under curtains all like willow,
let these thoughts swell and stir
inside your mind..

These thoughts about
our bodies' marble curves..

Watch my eyes
see their fire dance in odd new ways,
forget all past and the troubles of outside,
lose yourself in this throe of ec-sta-
sy!..

Call my name..
say that you..
love me...

Ghost-like,
Wraith-like,
Venus shows her prescence..

Breathe it,
taste it,
lust's unbreaking power..

Lungs seem fit to burst,
and your body trembles worse,
in the spasm of attraction
that we've made..

Attraction at the thought of marble curves...



You alone can make the world seem right..

Let me see
the light of marble..

curves...

Author notes

Based on the tune of "The Music of the Night" From Phantom of the Opera by Andrew Lloyd Weber. All phrasing, music, original lyrics, and rhythm is copyrighted to them.

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  • Toxic Angel
    August 7

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    wow i love the phantom of the opera and i thought this piece is really good especially when i started to sing it.


    • Darkrunn
      August 7
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      thanks! lol I was madly crushing over someone when I wrote it. ans THANK YOU!! lol, the whole point of it was to sing it. Thanks! ^.^


  • And Hyetal
    April 30

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    Turn your face away from the garish light of day, turn your thoughts away from cold unfeeling light, and listen to the music of the night.

  • U over did urself runn


    • Darkrunn
      April 29
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      Aww, thanks. I think I should've spent more time on the first two stanzas though.

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