shivers followed his finger
along the shore of her waist
and along to the lip of her
b l i n d f o l d
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A contest entry
- Three lines and One word by crivanea.
700 points, ended May 2, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow...this one was very subtly erotic
Still....excellent work. 
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suggestion: perhaps use another word besides along in the 3rd line ..avoid direct repetition
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ok...that's just creepy...lol..from the list..i take it that this was a B word..very good imagery..thanx for entering
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I love this...strength in brevity...the final word reveals all. Well done.
Mariana
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LOVED IT!
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Fantastic imagery!
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