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Sandwich short of a picnic.

For all my disgrace,
funny to think I am.
For many mistakes,
funny to think I have been.

Magicians can't beat this success,
but how have I tried?
Magicians don't touch excess,
but how have I tried not to?

Am I a saviour or a madman?
I know what I believe.
Am I a magician or a jester?
I know what you think.

Because of all my disgrace,
to think I am.
Because of my mistakes,
to think I have been.

Author notes

It's a little all over the place, that's how it's intended.
It's meant to show that nobody knows exactly who they are.
I shall be re-writing it.

So, what do you think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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