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Will you forget me

Will you ever forget me?
if you do!
I want you to know one thing!
there is a way that i would want to love you with..
dripping in passion..
closing my eyes against ur flaws..
my mind holding sails...
Setting towards that island where you wait for me always...
feeling destined to cherish your implacable sweetness..
and my love feeds on yours...
believing that i could live in your arms not leaving mine!

Will you ever forget me?
if you do!
I want you to see one thing!
there is more than a heart that cares for you..
a mind that scales through to you..
with thoughts that touch only you..
My life seems like looking at the crystal moon now..!
And i know that my senses will never let me forget..
a smell or an image would transport me back..
to a time of you and me...
Now i stare at your words when they set off to you..
But even then i see more of yours than mine!


Will you ever forget me?
if you do!
little by little..
i will also forget you little by little?
If you ever love me less..
little by little..
I will also love you less.. little by little..
Though i believe in this..
when i stare at my palms..
i can see my destiny poke..
I dream of a day..
that i see u in my dreams..
and stay awake helpless not able to get back to you..!

Will you ever forget me?
and love me less ...
little by little?

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  • Honestly, the punctuation is horrible
    and you have a lot of dependent clauses.
    If you would like some help, ask me :]

    Thank you for entering.


    -Mary