You have given me so much to appreciate.
You gave me strength, courage, spirit, hope
You showed me how to be happy, how to be sad,
how to love those close to me, how to avoid those not so close,
how it feels to be truly in love, how it feels to loose that love,
and how it feels to lose everything, yet gain everything at the same time.
You are my teacher, the air that fills my lungs, I am everything you give.
You are life, my life.
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this was just a little thought thing.
What did you think
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a very beautiful dedication poem! such a wonderful write to show your appreciation to someone who has given you so much and has shown you so much about life and all its wonders. this is a loving gift that you are giving in return to a teacher who has taught you so much. keep on writing from your heart, my dear. when you write from your heart, you can never go wrong. keep on listening to the lessons that this teacher that you have written about teaches you. he/she defintately knows and respects you, and also cares a lot for you. never take that person for granted. make sure that he/she sees this beautiful piece and that he/she knows just how grateful you are. it is always a good thing to show your appreciation to someone who touches your world so much.
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YES
we only have one life
so lets make the most
of it
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Fabulous write! Yes, this is life with all it's imperfections, highs, lows & beauty. I loved this!..DeeDee
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i think your more than that mam your a very fine poet as well
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This is amasingly good, so prolific just wonderful
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