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Spin and Weave

Spin and Weave,
A quilt of life begins,
The design thought out and complete,
Our life begins its course.

Lives measured in squares,
Actions controlling the string,
The wicked sisters thread our lives through,
Every day creeping towards death.

Our quilt created by choices,
A product of our actions,
The sisters merely slaves,
The creation of our fate.

For the fate of us all is death,
May it come quickly,
May our friends not grieve,
Let us simply drop into eternity,
Our simple lives of spin and weave.

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  • Beautiful. An interesting way to write, I like how life is a quilt. Seems to be inspired by mythology. Probably is, but I'm not all that well educated on that subject. Great write!

    P.S. I see you. =)


  • Ltecho13
    May 1

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    dude you you havnt writtin in awhile yet it seems that you became an incredible writer in that time, PS you never read my stuff Noel.

  • great work on this i love the message presented and your way of doing so