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With Every End

Everything you built falls from the vibrations. That come from the trembling and roars of an angry nation. Those who you rule have reached the summit of their frustration.

And they look to tear everything down. To start a world of their creation. They start hacking away at your foundation.

And nothing you could offer would break their concentration. As they draw nearer to you without hesitation. You try to hide to attempt isolation.

But you’re betrayed by those you felt were your relations. Tied up and cast asunder. The mob screams for retribution.

As your tear-filled eyes see the castles burning. The blood soaked masses prep your execution. And as you swing from the gallows noose we realize that you’re Armageddon. Is our revolution.

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  • as i have said before i can so see a raper rhyming to this piece i mean you have a talent with rhyme and you dont use boring words you use words full of power and emotion
    love it