Sun, shine again now that you’re needed
Stitch my open heart that bleeded
And take away this taken-over grim
I am losing my senses per diem
I will show reverence if I have to
Just bring me back as I used to
Moon light soften up the night
Rest my head and get me out of sight
If only I could be living my dream
Dreams do hurt at times but at times redeem
At times so nice and cozy though
Taking me to a heaven I still know
Big ocean would you get a bit curly
It will ease up you swallowing me
Stuck into a cyclone any way am I
I’ll be back to life if he comes nearby
He’s the spine of my existing essence
If only one day he’d like my confessions!
18-04-2009
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I think this rhyme was a little forced, it doesnt feel a s natural as it should, it doesn't flow as well as it could! lol i rhymed, but I do love the images that you have presented here, and the the honesty is really refreshing, so this was a great write! I'm not a fan of rhyme anyway, so I probably don't know what I'm talking about!
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lol not a biggy thanks for reading and bothering to say what was on your mind... In fact you are right!!
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