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i
cobalt
tincture, I;
you, open
dazzling saffron;
we, the briny sweet
of
tiny green
candies
ii
measured
mass of
precedents;
unyielding.
inevitable,
the glacial calving
roars,
a plunge to
your sapphire liquor;
dissolution.
iii
Forested blankets,
nest
at altitude;
Spotted your spots -
robin’s eggs
clipped my wing;
I am a
loft in
a spruce thermal.
~
In a list
A contest entry
- three colours blue by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended May 16, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lovely poetry, Paul - you've really made the "blues" your own. i also liked the vignette style here - it works so very well to show the different shades of this relationship. i especially liked the first vignette: two separate colours becoming one. this poem left me with two sensations: one of a fresh, cool plunge, but also at the same time with a sense of gentle warmth. a very lovely and creative take on the prompt! thank you for entering it into my content.
~ Nicolette
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This poem takes me into the experience of itself and leaves me not wanting to find words to describe it. Soft, fast, yummy. I love the imagery.
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Thank you once again BearWoman.
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very imaginative and passionate.
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Thank you Marcy. Blue generally is known to represent peace.
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Love this read! It's fast deep and filled with color and imagery. I did have to remove the background to read it.
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you Amera for stopping by. I've adjusted the font color a bit. Wanted to leave it soft looking.
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ah! I can see it now, much better.
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Gorgeous write!!
How beautiful this is...
Lovely poem.
The very best to you in the contest.
Best
Love Peace
campanaro
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Thank you campanaro for stopping by to read and contemplate. I like your blue nautilus shell.
Paul
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i love the idea of opening a color here, and not as if it's a can of paint...lol -- but i feel it as something else...wonderful poetry Paul. i love the word glacial.
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Thank you Tara.
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