Deep in the Emerald City of The Drunken Saints
An Angel sits on a StoneWall with a glint of sadness
in her Eyes so Green
With fresh cuts on her arm,to show the pain unseen
She cracks a smile,flowing with Childlike Charm
And as She sits upon her Wall O'stone,She ponders over
What has come and what has gone
A chilly Winter Breeze dances through her flowing
black hair,She sways her head to the Music of the wind
and ignores the doubt she feels within
It's all this Fallen beauty can do
To avoid the Final Crimson Sin
So she cries within..
This Stonewall Angel,So full of Grace
So full of Pain, no longer cares what is real
Or sane,here in the Emerald City of The Drunken Saints
Author notes
the girl, the angel is a frieind of mine.
and the Emerald City is my hometown..
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tell me how this made you feel
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wow this is soo powerful and full of emotion.. i feel the pain of that angel.. poor girl.. anyway great write!!
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Really good. Great job on this one! I love it all around!
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Seattle? I like this a lot. I feel as if I can relate 2 the girl/angel within this read. Thanks for sharing.
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Dublin.
and thank you for reading!
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great great great
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wow this is amazing. i llike that the angel is ablr to smile after cutting
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way to paint grace upon sadness
this has some mighty powerful images too .. great job
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you read this to me
and i absolutely love it!
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The way you described the images is really good. It gives a clear picture that one can live into. It's sad but I love it. Xds-gX
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wow...this touched me for some reason. dont get me wrong i love it its sad and beautiful. the words reached me though i love it :} my favorite so far
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