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Steel

i used to be in a normal life
had everything i needed

then i got hit hard
life gave it to me hard

i didn't know how hard it would be
school was tough
sports were hard

it's unimaginable pain
i became the one thing my mother feared
i became something that i had dreamed of

i got into the ring

i had fun and had tears

lost a friend

 

looked pain in the eyes

and gave hell

 

i had it made i hade it all

and the best thing of it all

was it was me

i kid that was a whimp

got up on his feet

and started giving back what the world was giving him

 

i made the best of it

i had a blast

i had fun

i had pain

 

my trainers always said

when i started to give

that pain without love was the best and that

boxers like us craved it all

 

hot head boxers

 

i had steel in my guts i had brass in my legs

and i still had to walk along my way

 

a hot haded boxer was the term given to us

when we got mad

we went all out

when we got pissed

we went crazy

when we got furious

we went insaine

 

it was fun it was hard

it doesn't matter anymore

 

because the hardest of all

is fitting in to the normal life

 

you got friends you got family

you depend on them

 

a boxer has nothing but his fists

the fist of the steel men

 

we had the times of majisty

we had times of praise

 

we had time that we for us

we had time to train

 

is was 24 7

for training had no stop

we had to keep it up

or else we lost

 

but my training especially

i had my own way of gettng strong

 

brute force

that was my way that was my style

take it in as you will

i'm just that kind of idiot

 

that would kill myself to be strong

i did it all

i had my chance

i gave the world the best time of my life

i got up in the morn

and got down in the dirt

 

I GAVE THE WORLD SO OF IT'S OWN MEDICINE

i looked pain in the eyes and said

I WIN

take it as you will

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  • i liked the end. that was so awesome! it was jst rlly awesome!! i loved it!!!!!


  • checkmate
    May 8

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    excellent. i love the strength in this piece. brilliant ending lines. and this especially:

    i had steel in my guts i had brass in my legs
    and i still had to walk along my way

    i love how this reads like a song. you could do so muh with this. love it.