The day has passed and night is here,
I'll talk you through,
don't have no fear.
I know why you're reading, I know your mind.
So leave all thoughts and logic behind.
You gore whores came to see a show,
there'll be blood tainted falling snow.
Bodies limping, bodies bleeding-
embrace the cries of humans fleeing.
Forget clichés and all that bores,
here'll be no bleeding plastic whores.
There is no evil, there is no good,
I am just quite misunderstood.
I kill for fun, I kill in rage,
I kill whatever fits in a cage.
I hunt them down and lock them up,
make them bleed to fill my cup.
They ask me why, they quiver and cry.
But why must I justify why I kill?
Some say that I am mentally ill.
They do not know, they do not care,
they'll all bleed in my blood red fare.
I'll make them puppets, make them clowns,
I'll make them smile in twisted frowns.
One twist of a blade distorts their features,
they become my poor dismembered creatures.
Go ahead and ask me, ask me who I am-
I am god and you are my lamb.
So shut up and take off your human suit,
you know we all were made from soot.
There is no difference between you and I,
inside we all have the evil eye.
I am just not a fucking pussy,
I'm not soft and so damn mushy.
I feel the rage as do you,
but I will make them all subdue-
subdue to my anger, subdue to my hate,
I am god, I make my own fate.
You are fake and so naive,
it's only yourself that you decieve.
So call me a killer, call me aside,
but I act out what you all feel inside...
Author notes
Title prompt - To whom it may concern
A contest entry
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Comments
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Great Write.
nicely penned, wish you luck
anyway
thanks for entering
Out of 100 You have Achieved 67
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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You gore whores came to see a show
Wonderful. This is what I wanted when I asked for macabre, a dark write full of imagery and insanity! Thanks for entering and best of luck to you.
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LOL I love the second stanza especially the way you just started it. Amazing word usuage through the poem and the rhyme was actually really good. I laughed the whole time, I guess that kind of makes me a little deranged maybe. Excellent work. As you already know I'm going to remove this but you aren't DQ'd from the contest. Thanks for entering and I await your future writes. Kahy
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Wow, great poem!
Favorite line:
Go ahead and ask me, ask me who I am-
I am god and you are my lamb
Twisted! Keep it up! -
wow. so odd. so evil. so descriptive such emotion. I love it. bloody great! thanks so much for your entry and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
andi
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Twisted evil sighs
A picture painted
bloody prized
Again your imagery is vivid
Like your take on evil
Thanks for the share
Darky
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Incredible...
this was just amamzingly dark... wow... the imagery was insane... it literally portrayed this person that beleives they are acting out what the rest of humanity thinks... mental but too good to pass up!!!! It was the best I've read so far, good luck in the contest!!! I hope you win!!!!
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This poem is the shit!
WOW! Love it, such rawness and twisted horror. This dark poem should get you quite a few bunnies, for it is that good. It is a write I wish I had done, such darkness you have painted here, and the imagery is awesome. Indeed it is one of the darkest poems ( apart from my own ) that I've read in a while. Great work done here and the best of luck to you in the contest.
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