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The Weaker Sex

Silently floating in buoyant shadows,
gently caressing my own silken curves.
Exposing the mist of fertile meadows;
I offer a dance exciting your nerves.

Tendrils of evil extend from my gaze,
wrapping around your insatiable need.
I spark the embers that set you ablaze,
preparing to steal your innocent seed.

You’ve entered my circle losing control,
absorbing the bliss of womanly flesh.
Begging for petals to swallow you whole,
I feed on your lust as we intermesh.

Insert your key in the feminine gate;
then maliciously... for you it's too late.

 

 

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    May 9

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    Wickedly lovely. Thanks so much for entering my contest and for honoring me with a show of your work

  • i love this its brilliant

  • exquisite weakness.


  • Heroesrox
    April 30

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    Awesome write. I really like this line.
    " Begging for petals to swallow you whole"

    Very nice. A great write. Thanks for your kind comments and applause. They are much appreciated. Keep up the greatness.


  • Darkwell
    April 30

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    This is a gorgeous horrific sonnet You really capture the sensuality and build up of a seduction brilliently in this without taking over the top into smutly killer weave!


  • Peripatetic gold member
    April 29

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    This is a wonderfully sensual and erotic horror story. It is even more delightful than the old Hammer films which so giddily and gloriously combined horror and sensuality.

    The imagistic euphemisms of the first stanza were wonderful in their idyllic and sensual duality. What follows is like a role reversal of the seduction in "Rosemary's Baby" as narrated in the first person by an unrepentant succubus!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 28

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    mmmm...

    this really would scare me , if i scared easy..BUT I DON'T! l.o.l. come get me tigress! , i'll fein helplessness! l.o.l. excellent and heated, and very enjoyable by way!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    April 28
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    sigh...
    Joe


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 27

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    Weaker??? Submissive to feminine wyles yes
    Controlled by the sex drive... HEL YEh
    Well done my dear

  • This is very very beautiful my dear sweet sis so truly romantic!!!!! Your words so incredible and perfect as always!!!!!!! I LOVE U SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    April 27

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    Ooohhhhh ... you never fail to amaze me ... beautifully written with a great ending couplet.

    All the best in the contest.

    Love
    Sue

  • YIKES!!!! you just gave me chills. very well done and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • Happy3
    April 27
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    Insert your key in the feminine gate.

    Wow! I love that. I really do, saucy baby!


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 27

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    Well, that was.....uh....well, I mean to say...the poem...uh the meter I ah liked...and um...I gotta go now...


    • Amera gold member
      April 27
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      LOL

      Before you go, get on your knees and bark like a dog!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 27
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    Not bad at all!


  • darkyinsoul
    April 27

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    Wow you alawys amaze me my friend
    Sensual with such flow
    I love to read your writes
    Thanks for the share
    Aleshia


  • PerVirtuous
    April 27

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    It's Killer!

    And it takes true talent to write so well when it is the exact opposite of your true self. Standing O's.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 27

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    oh my amera this is steamy and sensual throughout good luckin the contestmaralisa

  • Papagallo
    April 27

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    I would be your weaker sex 24/7. So sensious. You can be so naughty. Papagallo


  • malmadre gold member
    April 27

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    Petals mentioned in the third brought to mind a venus fly trap morphing into a penis trap The weaker sex brings the mighty to their knees. This poem does flex some muscle!


  • Daizee silver member
    April 27

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    Dayam...you go girl
    LOVE that last stanza

    Stacy


  • StarEyes
    April 27

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    Sis,

    What a great job you did on this one! Your work never ceases to amaze me! What a talent you are!!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Legend silver member
    April 27

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    Legend admits to being of the weaker sex.And feels the need to take a cold shower.Consider me emasculated. As ever you produce work that one can only hope to emulate in some way
    Excellent


    • Amera gold member
      April 27

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      aww... thanks, I changed that last line. I thought it was too gross, it's just susposed to be a horror poem.


      • Legend silver member
        April 27
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        Ha thanks a lot now I've been emasculated you tell me


  • JohnnyD gold member
    April 27

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    Dangerous? Of course you are for you are my Cubbie with sharp claws, pearly fangs and a tenacious appetite for life.

    Well done!

    love ya,

    Dad


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 27

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    Sensuous and threatening!
    A deliciously dark sonnet, you are the Queen of this genre (as of so many others!)

    I wonder if all your admirers realise just how dangerous you are!!!



    Jeff

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