Between candle light and moom light we are
Togeather we sit under the satrs and the trees
Open arms I give all of myself to you
Your heart your love & body I recieve
Yet you say don't depend on me
Hidden past & secreat's I see through your eye's
As I look deep into them trying to see
All of the thing's you have hidden inside thee
Your past as well as present you shall preveil
For the person inside thee Is stareing back at me
Where the road takes us we will not know
Since our life is already written and etched in stone
Written By: Brenda Gae Harper
April 27, 2009
Author notes
I used the phrase choice I chose are as follows # 5, # 2, & # 7 All in that order. Thank you for letting us choise more than one phrase
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wonderfully expression of the desire to understand and communicate those things that are always left unsaid.
I like it, I like it so!
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i like the last 2 lines
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